===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Great story! Aha!Teddy wins! Nice detail, nice credits. Poor contrast and/ or lighting prevented you from getting a 20-20-20. ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: I like it! Not a lot to complain about - maybe the motion of the fireball and the robot in the end could be a bit faster. ===== From chrisj@digiquill.com: It's a close call between this one and RDL... Great story, good effects, only one concern. Maybe a smoother transition to the teddy bear shot. ===== From quinet@gamers.org: Great! Good storyline and good animation. ===== From bill@apocalypse.org: I liked the green overlay parts, the rotating battery. I had trouble following the "story" though, it took me several replays before I understood what was going on. I guess the transitions were a bit choppy for my taste. The final shot of the teddy bear happen too fast for me. ===== From kentdj@revealed.net: Some of the transitions were a little confusing. I would have thought that the transition from "terminator/robocop style green vision" to full color at frame 341 would have started from the robot's point of view instead of above the stair railing. Aside from the abruptness of the transitions, this is a nice animation. ===== From r@159.134.245.19: Not selected for viewing based on the poster and description. I favoured the other ones I commented on although I realise I might have missed something. ===== From r@dial-up40.webbernet.net: Pretty well done. Nice story. Too many long shots. Too much bandwidth that could have advanced story spent on credits. The green view didn't work for me. It hurt visual appeal more than it helped the story. Sticking to HUD messages, crosshairs etc. would still have gotten the idea across. Blinking lights were a nice touch. Wallpaper occasionally looked more like a compression artifact. In spite of the teddy bear, good job overall. This comment by clem@dhol.com.