===== From cmorack@relex.com: Seems moons, water, and mountains are the fad for night. ===== From agage@mines.edu: The mountains could perhaps use a less regular (horizontal) texture to make them look more natural; but then again, who says that anything in a dream must be realistic? ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: I like the moon and the far water, but the wooden texture should have been scaled down quite a bit, I think. ===== From dormammu@erols.com: I love the mountains in the background. Moon is very good too. Only thing I dont' like is the texture of the wooden board on the bed. Looks very unrealistic to me. ===== From bill@apocalypse.org: The bed looks to simplistic - compared to the nice hills. ===== From karl@pemail.net: Nice idea. Perhaps some wrinkles on the bed cover as it looks rather flat compared to everything else ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: The reflections on the water look very nice. The picture has the quality of a dream image but here are a few ideas that would have helped make the image look more artistic:- Read something on composition. The very symmetrical arrangement is seldom attractive. If you were going for realism, the moon should be smaller and behind the clouds. The lighting on the bed and hills is too bright for the scene. Putting the bed at an angle would add a little drama to the scene. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Unusual choice of colors. What is illuminating the mountains and bed? ===== From arcana@sinbad.net: Not a bad image. I would have liked to have seen more of the bed to help place it within the scene. As it was, I had to read to text file to understand that the bed was a bed. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: Nice concept, although I think the bats would have been a nice touch. The bed could use some additional work -- the sheets are way to flat and the board doesn't look like wood to me. Also, the texturing of the terrain could use some enrichment. The sky is nicely done. This one has a lot of potential. ===== From r@1cust80.tnt18.lax3.da.uu.net: Vote for us! This is the best one! Excellent job for a 1st timer. Notable for lighting, originality, textures, modelling, composition ===== From r@207.232.193.166: What is that in the foreground? Other than that, very nice! Notable for textures, composition ===== From r@dial-up30.webbernet.net: The water, sky and moon are nice. The concept is interesting. The mountains need more detailed texture, the end of the bed looks like agate. Some sort of wood texture would have been better. The bedspread needs some detail. This comment by clem@dhol.com.