===== From castlewrks@aol.com: Focus of picture is the candle, not sketch as title implies... due to lighting. ===== From agage@mines.edu: A longer description would be nice. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: Good idea. Nice books. Window and curtains too 'blocky' to be effective. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Flame seems a little dim -- needs bright yellow (and even blue) at the base. Otherwise, a nice, simple scene. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: You need to describe how you did the image..... The concept is good. The flame could use a bit of turbulence, but the scene is otherwise quite good. ===== From r@dial-up30.webbernet.net: No information. No story. No structure on the curtains. Candle much too simplistic. This comment by clem@dhol.com.