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From rotht@televar.com:
The camera is way too close to the snow.  At first I thought the image was
corrupted.  The snow could also use some random bumps and dents.  I really like
the look of the sun against the orangish-redish sky, though.

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From mikko.oksalahti@dosetek.varian.com:
Simplicity is a big plus but the implementation needs improvement.
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From d97ta@efd.lth.se:
what's that blur in the middle? a smudge on the camera lens?

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From buck@cs.byu.edu:
Nice "warm" feeling.  However, you might want to have something in the
scene to focus on, esp. if you are using focal-blur.

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From djconnel@flash.net:
Try using normals on the canyon walls and they will look
more realistic.


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From fisher2@pobox.upenn.edu:
Looks like the camera is too close to the ground.  The focal blur covered
up any detail which might have been in the scene.  I really can't tell what
I'm looking at.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
What's wrong with this picture?  Take a look at the sun.  Take a look at the
shadows.  Where is the real light source?  Low, low technical marks for such an
obvious mistake.



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From r@199.45.245.103:
I don't say this very often, but the focal blur is overdone. The ground takes up
too much of the image. otherwise very nice.