===== From xeo@home.com: fish looks very good! ===== From jerry@hoboes.com: Nice fish! The landscape doesn't fit well with the rest of the image--it doesn't look like grass or dirt or anything; you might work on getting a better texture on it. The rounded rocks upstream a bit are a good touch, as are the ripples around the fish. The wine bottle seems to be floating awfully high, though. ===== From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com: The fish looks good, but the stream entering the lake looks a little awkward. Perhaps a wider mouth would have smoothed the transition. Nice job making a person without using Poser. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Everything is perfect, except that the construction of the hill is a bit inconsistent with the rest of the scene. ===== From vogelap@email.uc.edu: Nice feeling of action in this scene. ===== From paul.flanzy@jouy.inra.fr: salut je suis aussi fran_ais de versailles ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: I can't help it, but to me this looks like a toy model. Partly this is because there is nothing in the background, and the idea of a creek flowing down from, well, nowhere, is absurd to the mind even without thinking of it. Especially flowing down an absolutely bare rock. Secondly it's due to the "plastic" look the 3DS-renderings tend to have, although 3DS is deemed a "professional" tool it still lacks rendering quality, this has not changed much even with the latest raytracing plug-ins. ===== From johnson@pharmacy.arizona.edu: Hills look badly out of scale. ===== From jaime@ctav.es: Very good composition. Modelling also nice, but I found some textures not as realistic as others. Anyhow, it's different and fresh... ===== From Varyk@aol.com: There's something about the implied distance in the ripples on the water = that makes the fish look as big as the man, and the bush leaves looks hug= e behind him. Nice stream, dirty up the rocks in it. Good human figure = well posed. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Good effort. Interesting details all over. Bright and cheerful. Really good bumps on the water surface. The entire scene looks like a small model sitting on your desktop. The water reflections show too much aliasing. ===== From Martial@Biosys.net: Salut Jean Luc ! Bon travail, belle maitrise des diff_rents logiciel, manque peut _tre un peu d'atmosph_re. Cependant belle image, ;-) ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: The fish is particularly good. I wondered, until I read your text, if you had scanned it in.