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From spanky@wpi.edu:
You are a great storyteller.

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From denny1@home.com:
I love the idea! I could identify all of the objects in the scene, even
before reading the description.

The textures could use a bit more attention. The cinder blocks look a bit
like styrofoam, while the cork doesn't quite look right. The thimble at the
base of the table has some moire patterns.

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From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com:
I like the story very much so.
And the bed sheet impressed me - done by hand !!!
The rest just follows the text.
The bed is not just nice at all, hard to know/guess what it is made of.
The walls could be a bit better.
I did not recognise the stove or the sink, but what the hell. I like this
despite some negative (constructive ?) comments.

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From shipbrk@gate.net:
The textures look a little flat, but the sheet on the "bed" is fantastic!  I
may
have to "borrow" your technique for that!  :-)

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From bobfranke@halcyon.com:
Interesting story but it wore me out.  There is some nice 
modeling here, but most of the textures seem too 
smooth.  Try adding crand to the finish of the concrete 
blocks.

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From ethelm@bigfoot.com:
Story about image is far far too long. 

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From clem@dhol.com:
A very clever idea and a simple, but effective rendering.  
I particularly like the cement block texture and the wad 
of chewing gum (?)

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
Simple textures and a dubious connection to the topic. The bedsheet is
impressive
though.

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From jull43@ij.net:
A nice update of an old story but the lead up to the image, the story, leads me
to expect something like I would find in a crawlspace rarely entered. This is
pristine. Other than that an interesting image. The lighting looks like just
about where a polaroid flash would come from. The handkerhchief though way too
small for a 4" tall "human" scale and too many hanging folds does a good job of
what a sheet might look like. 



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From r@dc2-modem877.dial.xs4all.nl:
Nice description, but the image has a bit of a 'plastic' look. I think the
textures are just too smooth for my taste. Also, the scene has an empty look
due to the big part of the wall that is visible. Original idea though, and I
admire the modeling of the sheets and the bottle cap! Greetings, Julius


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From r@dc2-modem877.dial.xs4all.nl:
Nice description, but the image has a bit of a 'plastic' look. I think the
textures are just too smooth for my taste. Also, the scene has an empty look
due to the big part of the wall that is visible. Original idea though, and I
admire the modeling of the sheets and the bottle cap! Greetings, Julius


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From r@209.155.62.50:
Notable for originality


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From r@209.155.62.50:
Notable for originality