===== From spanky@wpi.edu: I really like your fog/background. It seems you run into a problem with scale in certain parts of this image. For example, your ship seems as big as your castle, and that Loch Ness type monster is absolutely gargantuan! The box in the foreground with the winch is nice, the wood looks really good. This image has alot of potential, and I think you should continue revising it as you learn new techniques......Good luck! ===== From seayt01@mail.mgc.peachnet.edu: Well done. However, I think the image is a bit crowded - fewer objects would have been better. ===== From denny1@home.com: Is that a grappling hook? Intruders storming the castle! To arms! Making the nails in the foreground off-kilter (not lining up) is a nice touch. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Nice wood. Texture on monster could be better. Structure atop mountain is a bit odd; seems poorly supported. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: I like where the view is taken from. I like the castle on top of its island. The engine at the back of the baloon appear to be way too heavy for the baloon. Nice V formation (geese, swans, B747 ?). The snake's skin looks odd, but maybe it is not that bad, since it's a sea snake, it should probably look like some sea creature which it somewhat does. The anchor is about to fall, beware. And one of the splashes around a whale tail looks like it's out of the water (will you do a close up on that one to verify ?). Very good use of fog, nice sky. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: Good concept but the image is a bit 'busy'. ===== From gshaw@monotix.co.za: Wood texture is good, water also. I like the sunrise very much. Must be hard to lay seige to that castle ===== From clem@dhol.com: Beautiful image. I like the way the snake's head and neck echo the castle on the spire. The composition of this image is good. The snake needs a bit more texture and the head needs more detailed modelling, and there may be just a hair too much fog for my taste, but this is an eerie and excellent image. ===== From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au: Nicely balanced and composed image - the distant birds and balloon really make it. The seprent looks a bit plastic though, and the boat looks like a bathtub toy. Nice detail int he foreground and the peak itself. ===== From jull43@ij.net: Castles had a specific purpose. Mixing them with "monsters" does not work. Even dragons flew into them. ===== From r@209.155.62.50: fun!