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From sammy@cube.net:
Hmm... very colourful, but distressingly confusing. One Tip : Try making simpler
scenes first. Just one Spaceship, one planet and a sun for example. Stills of
Space battles are difficult if you want to avoid confusing the viewer.
well ... ok : another tip : Using noise as starfield is fine, however you should
use a lower noise level to avoid having the sky looking like a wall. 


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From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com:
Far from being my cup of tea. Taste, when you take us !
Maybe someone is going to call that art like those others called the cubism for
Picasso art, well, I rated this as I would have rated some of the Picasso of
that period : low.
Nothing against you personally.

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From ethelm@bigfoot.com:
A bit busy with nothing that captures the attention as 
the central theme.
Last competition we said you should stick to making one 
really good image instead of two 'okay' images. (or 
words to that effect). This still holds true. Have a look at 
photography books or magazines on 'composition'. This 
will help with the placement (and how many) of objects.

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From gshaw@monotix.co.za:
Colours clash. Try  to avoid usins so many bright colours in a scene

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
This looks very cartoony... all the bright colours and simple shapes. Not sure
what to suggest... maybe calling it a cartoon!

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From peter@table76.demon.co.uk:
Unless you wanted that effect on the planes, I think they would have been more
effective if they were smaller - then you could also have had more planes in
the scene.  I don't think a single TTF object looks convincing enough, when
it's that large in the image.

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From jull43@ij.net:
Even following the bad stuff out of Hollywood it could be more realistic. 


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From r@209.155.62.50:
I hate to be cruel, but - why bother?