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From tom@tomandlu.co.uk:
Technique and composition need work IMHO.

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From onefastjb@aol.com:
Reminds me of sim city animation.

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From p_chan@shaw.ca:
The reflection of the face in the eye is a nice touch.  
The objects on the pollen are two small for details to be 
scene.  I would recommend trying to place objects 
differently so that the pollen worlds can been seen more 
clearly.